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Illusions

Post  inanimatedreamer on Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:32 pm

she's mysterious
you feel something radiate
spins your head
drops you to the floor
delirious

writhing round
searching for a outlet
hearing your body scream forgiveness
but all you think is death

stretching your body towards the sky
praying to the invisible that once believed you
cast out
that is all you are
your body rejects you
its own flesh and blood repulsed

this is all i can say on this sorry matter
yet still the wars continue
the battles rage
all inside
this skeleton cage
and you scream once more
fall to the ground
while some stop and stare
yet they step round
they don't care you're there.

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Re: Illusions

Post  SpringMoon on Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:34 am

At this moment in time, for the first time in ages, I am speachless!!!
Your poetry takes my breath away..just don't stop writing, do you hear me?!!
Hugs Kate xxx

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